reflection

This week mr wood made us do a 50 word story we had to write a long story and keep shortening it. this was really hard because there had to be exactly 50 word and the had to be a twist in it. I keep failing but in the end I got it. Here is my work

The Great Race

I am racing only three laps to go. It is coming round to my next lap. I ride no handed waving to the crowed. I see the finish line I  as fast as I can and I win . “Get of the bike it will brake said mum”. “Come on mum”!!!