The Amazing Voyage is the third book of the kingdom of fantasy it is a good book if you like happy ends and a bit scary beginning.I think it is a good book you should read it.

When  I  was  a  born  I  got  a  toy  from  my  granddad and  my  grandma.  It  is  soft  and  cuddly.  It  was wrapped  in  red  wrapping  paper. It  was  special because  they  are  my  last  grand  parents.  Inside  it has  cotton  wool.  I  sometimes  hug  it,  it  is soft.  It sleeps  in  my  bed  with  me  every  night.  It  is  a  good  toy  for  kids  to  hug  and  play  with  at  day  or  at  night.  there  is  a  little  hole  under  one  of  the  arms  and  I would  always like to take stuff out.It is...my cuddly soft sheep.

by Richard  

A long long time ago there were eight fish,one mother fish and seven baby fish. One day the mother fish warned the baby fish not to go outside the cave because the giant fished every day in the winter to get food for himself. A year passed then the seven baby fish swam outside the cave then they decided to play by the rocks. The oldest one said “the last one to the rocks is a loser” but the smallest one said “don’t go, remember what mum said”, but it was too late. So he had no choice,so he followed his brothers, two moments later they were all in a net.All the giant heard was HELP! HELP! so he got up and pulled his net in.He was so…EXCITED! that he threw his net up in the air.Meanwhile their mother had heard them cry so she prayed and prayed for them to come back but it was too late.Then the sky father sent an albatross to take them to the sky so he could turn them in to stars.Because they didn’t listen to their mum.Now they only come out at winter because their mum said so in the prayer.Now when we look up in the sky we see seven stars all together, they teach us to listen to someone you trust when they tell you something.

By Richard

Tuesday 28th July

WALT write a simple myth.

A long long time ago there were two gods they were best friend,they always played games like tag by jumping to different planets so that one could not catch the other.Years past then one day the giants became enemies, then every time they saw each other they would start a fight.Soon one of them got puffed and started puffing out air which turn into clouds, sometimes  they blew the same direction which made thunder and when they bang together it makes an electric bolt which is called lightning.

by RICHARD

dear Diary

                     Dear Diary 
I am so Excited that I get to go home tomorrow.It will take 3 months till I get to are house.

I'm a little bit injured but I am fine. I also have a missing arm because it got shot by a gun I don't know what type of gun it was.It was so bad I had to get it cut off.

                                                                                   
Today I am just sitting around because of my arm it is the most important hand to hold my gun.Yesterday I got my arm cut off. It hurt but it was the right thing to do.

This evening I am going to take off all my muddy clothes and boots and put on nice clean clothes because they won't let dirty clothes in to the ship.It is a really really big ship.

I am so excited that I get to go home.

Planet one sing along

My Plan:I am in a rocket and I am discovering new planets with Bob and Fred (my brother)

Setting-in a rocket and on the planet ‘sing along’

Characters-bob(my friend)Fred(my brother)me(richard)

Problem-they never stop making noises

Solution-they sing me the answer

WALT 1:I can group a few ideas correctly eg 1-4 paragraphs and I can use connectives to link my sentences

WALT 2:I can include characters and a setting

Brooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooom that was my rocket blasting off.I am an astronaut who goes around the universe discovering new planets.I am with my brother Fred and my best friend Bob.Bob is driving the rocket.bom bom bom bom bom bom bom.

I wonder what it could be.It sounds a bit like drums but it can’t be drums or maybe it could be?

I say to Fred, “Can you tell Bob that we should have a look”.FRED,  I shout, “I can see the planet,Quick, tell Bob.  Me and you will discover it”.I run inside the rocket and start to get in to my astronaut suit. I just finish getting my suit on when my brother Fred comes in and gets his suit on too. He says “you forgot your helmet and your oxygen tank”.

A minute later we were landing in the planet sing along.Now we can hear the drumming even louder than last time. it sounds did like this BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM BOM. I thought I needed ear plugs.So I tightened my helmet so it did not sound so loud it was almost as loud as when the rocket took off. Then I started hearing different sounds they sounded  like weird noises, like a two year old who is learning how to sing a song off the radio and could not talk properly.Then I saw something coming up this like dirt road.

It kept coming closer and closer, then I saw it  was lots of creatures coming closer and closer.They were all different sizes and shapes and colours.Their colours were green,blue,pink,red,purple,orange, yellow,brown. Then I saw the biggest one, he was so big he was looking over the mountain.All the creatures were making sounds.  When they got to me they stopped, then they got out their instruments and started to play a song which sounded like a normal song but a little low in pitch.