Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 4 May 2017

Reflection

Today we read an book about the deer debate. In the book there are four people talk and deer. Two People want to keep deer and the other two not.

The Wild Deer Debate
In this article there are two sides to this debate-those that want deer to stay and those that don't Four opinions are given. Use this organiser to locate those for and against deer, with their reasons.


For
Against
  • We should keep deer.  Plus It is a healthy, easy way to get food. The forest feed our family. Were happy when our freezer is full of lean meat.
  • In 1860 I would say not to introducing deer. I think people made a bad mistake. I think aerial hunting is good.
  • Hunting is not just about killing deer, It's the whole experience. I love deer running free in New Zealand. You don’t see many sports where you can have granddad and grandkids together.  
  • Deer have join an army of bad animals. It’s no wonder that native species are dying out. In a perfect world the deer would be die and and there would be lots of extinct animals alive.
  • Friday, 24 February 2017

    reflection

    This week mr wood made us do a 50 word story we had to write a long story and keep shortening it. this was really hard because there had to be exactly 50 word and the had to be a twist in it. I keep failing but in the end I got it. Here is my work

    The Great Race
    I am racing only three laps to go. It is coming round to my next lap. I ride no handed waving to the crowed. I see the finish line I  as fast as I can and I win . “Get of the bike it will brake said mum”. “Come on mum”!!!

    Friday, 16 December 2016

    2016 reflection

    I think this year I had a really good year for literacy and numeracy. I would like to thank my teachers Miss Panther, Miss Leigh and Ellie's also Miss Prendergast for what a great year I have had and thank you there for commenting and look at my blog. Next year I am moving up to Totara 1 Mr Wood's class. But I will still have the same blog.
    Here is one of my favorite pieces of writing I did this year. I even have a picture of how I would look like.

    If I was a mythical creature I would be a three headed giant red dragon with giant golden horns. I would think it is good to steal treasure and hid it in caves and I would fly around and have fun where no person could come only my dragon’s. I would be the biggest dragon there ever was and my three heads one would shoot out fire another would shoot out water and the last head would shoot out snowball's . If I was in a fight I would always win but I only fight enemy dragons.

    My scales would be burning hot. My tail has a electrical barb at the end and my feet can send shocks which can make earthquakes when I stomp my feet. I have wings that can flap faster that any creature apart from my friend flash he is just faster than me which make me race a lot with him some time I win but mostly I loses.

    Strong-a-gram is also one of my friend’s he is really strong but he is not so fast, also he is a bit shorter than me but has more muscle. Flash is really small and fast but he can also camouflages he is really good at getting the treasure when me and strong-a-gram distract our enemies. You would probably ask why a I would say that it’s because if you're a dragon you have to steal other group’s treasure.

    Oh, There is Sid and Fred they are twins they have two heads and can dodge things in a battle they are a water dragon. they are so alike that when in battle the enemy thinks the are one person in two place at once. Strong-a-gram is a black dragon and flash is a bush dragon which can change color. I am a fire/lava dragon so I can live in volcanoes.  

    Friday, 2 December 2016

    Writing Reflection T4 W8

    For one of my writing things I had to Persuade Santa why I should be on the naughty or nice list. 
    We had to write it one the google drawing. I put a introduction then three reasons and Conclusion. 

    Friday, 25 November 2016

    writing W7 T4

    This week we did some thing different Miss Panther has made a site saying nearly Christmas and she has put different activates on there. One of them was to rewrite the 12 days of Christmas. I did that and then I did a bit of fluffing around. Here it is.